Black Poetry : 2 Da ~~~> Point, I Guess

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Yeah...that was to the point!

    No mistakes...no earth shattering quakes...

    No more living life being on the take...

    Just plain and simple.....this is what happens after the break.....up

    We learn to

    move on!
     
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    When we treat others wrong, it does come back to get us, often in the worst way. Hard not to think of what could have been, but, sounds like you did pretty well putting one foot in front of the other. I hear ya, poet.
     
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    "If a boomerang belongs to you my friend, can't nobody take it away,
    If you wake up one day and find it missing...
    It'll return one day!"
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    I have to admit, you did give your ALL,
    I'm well aware I made you beg and crawl.

    I was hotter:hot: than fire, rolling in flames,
    but you had to have known, I was full of games.

    When you offered your heart, I crushed it like ice,
    kept it moving and I never thought twice.

    but

    I'm wiser now, ...too a lesson I learn,
    that you always get...what you give in return.

    That boomerang I throwed at you, was no joke,
    it boomerang back ...and cut my own throat.

    I know you don't now want to hear this song,
    and in all due respect ...
    I'm glad you moved on:bye:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so on point awesome write bruh !
     
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    Fa real. Hee, hee, hee

    Loved the part where you said, "What goes around comes around
    Just don’t b*tch when it’s your turn"

    Reprocussion are lifes discussion, liberating ya mind with understanding, flowing into wisdom
    For anothers soul answer.

    Beautiful piece

    Thanks for the read.

    D.S.
     
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