Black Poetry : 1st sight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icandi, Oct 14, 2003.

  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you believe in love at first sight?
    well didnt til i met you
    did you believe you'd find that special someone
    and it was someone you barely knew
    did your heart beat louder
    like was trying to give you a hint
    did your soul cry out
    cause you felt it coming from within

    My heart said calm down and just be yourself
    my mouth said hello... to the person i just met
    my eyes looked over him and said they like what they see
    my hands wanted to touch you, cause they were in disbelief
    because the man i saw before me was
    the one i wanted to get to know
    and maybe in the future we'll grow
    to be closer in every aspect of the word
    cause love at first sight is real
    even when it seems to be a blur.
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this..... and I noticed u live in Texas? Me too..... lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHOAAAAA!!!
    DIS WAS SMOOTH AS BUTTA
    LIKE DIS HERE
     
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    like this alot
     
  5. Deasia

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    That was tite. I really liked it.
    Keep up the good work.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one kicked open my closet..

    Now I must dance with my skeletons.. I don't mind. We are old friends.

    Icandi

    I believe in love at first sight. Nobody else has done this... but you know the funny thing is you may loose them. They may not feel the same intensity that you do. But it is still real. Oh she entered the room.. and there was silence. Actually everything else stopped. For a small fraction of time.. only her and I were moving. I think there was a breeze.. cause I turned and looked, as she entered the room. I still feel the bite from years ago, of the love and things I went through things similar to your writing... I was like a kid again...
    If there was a crack in the universe.. and love came thru only in that moment. I think it would be love at first site. I needed rescue. and there she was.. :heart: Angel flying low. :heart:
     
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  7. Deasia

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    Go head Hodee got me started. LOL I feel u on that one.


    A brotha got me thinkin of him daily
    after parting our ways
    not wanting to think of him No more days

    Why does the heart not do what the mind tells it to
    to rid myself this love I thought I knew

    so it looks like
    i am going to have to fly on like a kite
    because that once love at 1st site
    was worth the scar after the bite.

    A lesson well learned.
     
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