Black Poetry : 1st post ever(wanna be poet) please let me know what u think

poeticwords

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Im just a wanna be poet
trying to get better
I know im not that good
but...
I seem to be drawn to poetry
Like lent to a dark sweater
I find myself in word spells
as if my brain has an unspoken story to tell
some people say I have talent
well, hell... I can't tell
I've been trying to write a poem worth reading for years
but all i can come up with... are lame poems about tears
maybe I have to go through the darkness to get to the light
but from where I stand in the dark
theres no sign of brigtness in sight
maybe yall,my peers can bring me insight
 
you got skills,
i can see it in your words.
don't listen to those haterz,
they flow in cow herds.
i started off like you,
talking 'bout break ups and tears.
but i kept on trying,
and i got better--so i'm now here.
i got over 700 poems,
but if i have no understanding they are of dust.
keep on scribin',
destee and the crew will help u,
that's enough.....................(i don't know what they talkin' 'bout u got some SERIOUS skills-just let a little more out-don't hide what u keep inside u feel me?)
 
The emotional feel u pose
make u a poet in whole
ya wordz of flow show it
poetically sprayed ........
just let ya feelings go
flow on mental things u know
drop lines on the life u pose
scribe in vibes of what u heard
dis be da poetic word
 

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