Black Poetry : 1st Post" Brenda's Baby Boy"

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  1. Knowlove81

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    This is a true story to a degree, it is about me.....although i do not know my real parent when i found out about my past the world premire of"Brenda's Baby" was coming on" Video Soul/Gold? i forget but it had the brotha with the green eyes hosting it on BET. And my life kinda matched the theme of the song. So this is from the Baby's point of view....Now a man.

    U see I really feel that Im Brenda little Baby boy, its not a game

    And its ****** up, she didnt even give me a name



    I guess she was about 12 and was in love with a molester

    You see I never met my mommy she tried to kill me I was born of a lesser



    A lesser purpose, how she gave birth to me and think of killing her boy

    Was found in the dumpster surrounded by crack viles being choked by my own umbilical chord



    I guess daddy wanted no parts so she had a little ***** solo

    Almost left me in the toilet didnt recognize me, covered in **** soakin



    I figured she had to be young cause no women in her right mind would do that to her son

    And I hate her for what she did wanna find her to show her what her son has become



    Still have nightmares of being in that trash heap ****** ballin

    Difference is she didnt come back when she heard me callin



    Wonder sometimes why are the thoughts that I have so crazy

    Maybe an inbred, guess she didnt know, distant cousins maybe



    I just wanna ask her if I have any sisters or brothers

    Why she did what she did, mommy why am I such a crazy motherfucka



    If you didnt want me mommy you coulda dropped me off at a church or hospital

    Used to dream of killing you really saying I love you is impossible



    Mommy how come you never ever looked me in my eyes

    Why when I was 2 degrees from freezing to death you ignored my cries



    Mommy I always wonder if I look like you or my daddy

    You coulda aborted my *** mommy whyd you let this happen



    You see I think shes dead to young to realize that life aint a game

    I was told I had a momma that was slain, and Brendas her name
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace and respect
    welcome poeticly from above as i bless this wit love

    Deep scribe from what's inside and the tales of Brenda da baby and what is
    i look to read more of you soon ya pen have a lot to say , show love as love
    is given as we poeticly rise again welcome to the forum & family.
     
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    I do apreciate the love and only plan to do unto other as is done to myself......which leaves me no choice but to show love. Thank You
     
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    No thank u and welcome Home because you are home here
    continue to express poeticly
     
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    first let me say heyyyyyyyyy im the oddball here. and i like your style you had my attention to the end. it sad but true this often happen alot. i too cant wait until you display more of your fine work my brotha. flo on, flo on!
     
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    Hi knowlove81
    Welcome brother, relax...you're home and with family now.
    You dropped a heavy load here.
    In a case where....
    A Baby, gave birth ...to a baby. Until the chain is broken, history tends to repeat itself ..over and over and over again. 12? where was her mother with a 12 year old baby? what could a child give a child? ...yet, you made it...did she?
    Since she wasn't alloted the chance to live...Brother, live for her.
    Much thanks for sharing a very deep part of your soul.
     
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