Black Poetry : 1st Child

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved u the 1st moment I knew about you
    On that June 18th morning
    I feed u
    and I luv u
    U really gave me any serious problems,
    We listen to movies togather
    and read books, it seemed like forever
    I couldn't wait to see ur face
    You were goin to be like your mom
    strong-willed and stubborn
    unique and elegant
    When u got bigger,
    so did my figure
    U knew my body as if it was urs
    YOu was a fighter
    and I didn't mind the physical pain
    You wanted weird things
    That I couldn't believe
    And that I held u
    And saw what I created
    I cried with agonoy
    Because God wanted u with him
    U died in my arms
    Never able to see Earth's beauty
    You would've been 3 yrs old today
    A Blessing to me and your father
    We would've loved and cared 4 u
    Because u was ours
    And now you're God's
    Just remember we luv u
    and we'll always be in our hearts:
    MY 1st Child
     
  2. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was really beautiful, you sound like a proud mother, are you? i hope this gets the love and recognition it deserves...

    much love.
    plain.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully bonded love of mother & child
    nothing like a feeling of a new born 1st born
    i wish u well in motherhood
     
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    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a mothers love
    sent to the friut of her womb,
    Not a mother but grown a bit to admit
    Nothing takes the place of the great impact that a mother has.
    I am gald you did this tribute,
    and I know your angel misses you too,
    stay strong
    Much LOVE.
     
  5. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really apreciate everyones comments but I'm not a mother and I'm still a virgin but I really appreciate your comments
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this bond between mother and child nice work
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very touching and i enjoyed it although it brought tears to my eyes :cry:
     
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