Black Poetry : 1968 LoVEchiLD

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    11/27/1968 LoVEchiLD
    of sperm and egg
    of x and y
    who met on the harmony
    of a Supreme's cut
    that's right I was
    created Mo-town style
    who danced on the stage of
    Venus' potter's wheel
    and was shaped to be
    eros/
    in the physical
    so feel me

    close your eyes/let
    my voice conduct your thoughts/
    paint your unnumbered dreams
    on windowpanes to windows
    that frame your soul

    Do you like what you C?

    Denial will only be deemed
    a lie for I see with
    my mind's eye that this
    1968 "Originated" LoVEchiLD
    has the truth of E.R.L
    flowing
    .....across your lips
    ..upon your palette...and
    ........down the back of your
    throat...and I
    ask "taste good doesn't it?"
    your desiring side presented
    what your
    .........."box" could not
    absorb...and you expressed
    it so vividly as you
    fed me 3D sighs off of
    your love vine
    ...
    "Yes, it does taste good"

    circa 19(69) LoVEchiLD


    (c)2001 blakverb

    *Eroticism, Love, Romance


    *it's a little ruff, but, bear with me 'til the rewrite
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Blak....

    I remember that year
    '68 in the 20th century
    awesome and clear

    RFK shot
    ...MLK slain
    by James Earl Ray
    the My Lai Massacre
    -- coincidentally incidental
    or inconsequential...

    Never you mind that
    piece of 'his'story
    I'm more interested
    in Blak's own biography ~

    The proverbial son
    of action words
    "Born To Be Wild"
    late 60's profile

    Created as the black male
    image of Plato

    Love's own philosopher
    articulated well
    and presented
    as 32
    Erotic Desires

    ...and yes it tastes well... :kiss: :tongue:



    Tight piece of personal info Blak ~ well done!!
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering those times so well. Thank you Poet.

    BE
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** Verb!

    Brutha you gotta rediculous talent dog! this hea was all flame!!!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    rewrite ma ***. This was scrait butta baby.



    One
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    This piece is spot-on brotha!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mm-mm-mm...

    it tastes so-o-o-o-o-o goooooood.
    -7
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll mucho...i dig the words..

    one love,blak
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repostrepost
     
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    An inticately woven portrait of this poetic man. Wow.
     
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