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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Sep 1, 2003.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deeply scarred by the one
    you thought would never hurt you
    will you let me be the one
    who comforts and embraces you
    trying to keep face
    keeping your feelings all to yourself
    will you let me be the one
    you turn to when you have no one else

    will you let me be the one
    who arms you find warmth in
    will you let me be the one
    you depend on and place your trust in
    can i just hold you throughout the night
    as you sleep your way through
    my mind is made but the decision is up to you

    dont get me wrong
    i'm not trying to come on to you
    i just hate to see a sista cry
    so let me help you thru
    will you let me be the one
    who shines a light on your pathway
    will you let me be the one
    who puts a smile on your face..............
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, you can truelly be the one. I loved this so deep and sweet. Keep it flowing
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely said and done
     
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    egyptianeyes Active Member MEMBER

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    Are you real ?
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, where were you last night at 4?
     
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    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the words!!
     
  7. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm with Randee - where you been hidin?
    beautiful flow!
     
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    my goodness
    this was so on
    oh so very nice
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh... how i have been waiting for those exact words! at least i am now comforted by the fact that someone somewhere thinks that way. love your flow. blessings!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope she has it in her to try. This is pretty.