Black Poetry : ?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 28, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soft gentle words he passed down giving a
    thought of a dream that some
    how he knew.
    A Prince that rescue or a devil
    not showing his face
    I lay my head down and burst
    into tears for the love I have found
    Don’t know if it is true or false
    just know the distance is killing
    Gentle whispers he speaks
    love rolls off his lips what of
    my beauty and scare of my past
    To trust I do
    To love I have
    To be I haven’t
    The love he confess is it true or fake
    the love he have proclaim can he
    hold or let go
    Pouring each other’s dreams
    and lingering in the thoughts
    what will it come lust or love or
    just a moment in passing
    Some turn feelings off an on
    hurting what they do not know
    but wanted to share a feeling left
    that aches not soothe
    Gentle he brushes my cheek and
    brings me towards him saying
    I am here to stay but only time will tell
    So do I let go or do I believe.
    He came and stole my mind and
    took my heart and gathered my soul
    you have yet said we but always my
    I could go on an on but what will be
    the point for you took what
    I let you and gave what I wanted
    But a true love will not pass but return
    Love me as I am
    Love me as I am
    Love me now
    And love me later
    Love me
    as I am a BLACK QUEEN
    If to lie you hurt yourself if you tell the truth
    you gain a lifetime of joy
    (c)blackangel 2002
     
  2. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really great....


    "But a true love will not pass but return
    Love me as I am
    Love me as I am
    Love me now
    And love me later"


    Aww, true love...the most beautiful feeling....
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow
    gentle, calm
    Peace
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pharaoh Jah and Bluewater... thank you for your kind words
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed love is a bond
    of the soft touch
    from da dreams of the
    two of us
    it holds it's grace and beauty

    u mastered a flow so beautiful love this
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your words....
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Beautiful description and expression of that...

    forever love....that can only be broken by that never love. Can you hear me love?

    :lol:

    :toast:
     
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    I loved this line: A Prince that rescue or a devil
    not showing his face
    I guess that's about the size of it. Love can be a maze, but it should be a peaceful walk in the park. This was wonderful.
     
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    :read: Dont know if I wanted it to stop or not . All I do know is that I felt every drop on the inside :luvv: