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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no title, just inner thoughts i ponder


    anotha long hot humid day
    walkin along wishin a simple breeze
    would pass by my way
    as i come 2 the road i stop
    and watch for traffic
    slowy approachin in a pimped out
    ride passes by anotha self made tragic
    a brotha with gold on every single tooth
    music so loud feels like my ears are
    about 2 bleed
    but a little teachin is all that brotha need..........

    dont get it twisted there's nothin wrong
    with havin the pimped out rides and the
    gold in the mouth
    but the lack of priorities is what
    i'm speakin about
    this is the same brotha that approached
    me two weeks ago asking 2 borrow
    $10 so he could grab somethin 2 eat
    his ride needed a new system so he spent
    all his money for the week

    brothas like that get me mad as h***
    frontin like they got somethin when
    they know **** well
    they're still livin at home
    with their mommas
    dont have a pot 2 piss in
    or a window to throw it out
    this is the ignorant ish i'm talkin about

    i understand if you're still at home
    cuz you're N college or tryin 2 get
    on your feet
    but if you're there cuz u dont wanna
    pay rent on your own
    i think the mommas need 2 take
    the advice of E. Badu and tell
    them to call Tyrone
    when are some of us gonna
    grow a backbone
    some of us try to be
    like the rappers we see
    in the vidoes
    so we start disrespectin
    our females call them
    chicken heads, bi*****, and hoes

    maybe one day we'll stop
    doing what we see other
    people doing and start
    livin for ourselves
    cuz thats truly the only
    way we'll ever prevail
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed and i felt every line u pose
    welcome to destee.com poetic flowz
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    nice
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're flow was so tight. and your words were even tighter.
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi U dont know me so...

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    WELCOME :) and HELLO :)

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    this was a powerful message and I loved the way u built it :)
    when ya ready I'll be waitin to read some more :)
     
  5. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone