Black Poetry : .

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UbZoRbShUn, May 2, 2001.

  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .....

    I've seen many blue tears in my young life,
    I hope she finds joy, to ease that pain....
     
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    One word ma....

    ......DEEP.....!!
     
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    she cries...

    endless until the bathtubs spills over
    and the stairs become a waterfall
    cascading into streams
    and deeper into winding rivers
    until finally
    those tears pour into the ocean
    of unknown dreams to come
    I AM SHE
    and YOU R 2...

    FEELIN YOU SIS 4 SHO! KNOW DAT!
     
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    as a friend i would
    open my heart
    open my eyes
    open my spirit
    open my arms
    so that you could
    open your pain
    into my embrace
    and i can catch
    the blue tears
    flowing from your
    open wounds...

    Zorb, needless to say you have blessed me again with this one. thank you for revisiting this scribe...

    ***kleenex***
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shun

    I cant tell you enuff... you know, how I dig what you do. know that you neva cry alone ma...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shun

    I got some tissues, a couple rolls of toilet paper & some paper towel... lol

    We can cry all night...lmao

    It's all love
    Reas
     
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    Zorb,

    Baby I'll dry those tears!!!!

    Dug the flow!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    i love this melancholy flow. it makes me think of myself just a little while ago before i found the path i was to take. but even now my cheeks sometimes stain with my blue tears.
    i was all in this piece!
    -7
     
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    Sadden Faces

    oh if my eyes were dry..
    Would i still cry?

    That was beautiful...and it touched me... You make me want to scribe...