Black Poetry : 12am

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Feb 3, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's 12 am and your still in my crib
    Wondering if it's true about all the things u heard I did.
    eyeing my body and licking your lips
    drinking my essence with eyeful sips
    yeah I know u heard of "Hot Butter Rich"
    from the chicks that I hit
    IM a sexual being with a Gemini twist
    two for the price of one
    double the pleasure
    double the fun

    But it's 12am and u still in my crib
    and you are still wondering about the things u heard I did
    Everyone else has left but you're still right here
    Brave woman indeed because I see no fear.

    IM a creature of the night but that IM sure u know
    your just chilling on my couch like u don't want to go
    the music is slow
    the volume is low
    Plus your body's form is like Whoa!
    fellas u know the kind
    body off the chain
    But lady has a mind
    laughs at your jokes
    gives your ego long strokes
    Keeps herself up and sexy
    But why does she have to test me?

    It's 12am and now u all next to me stroking my leg
    Any closer and baby u will be playing with my head
    any closer and baby u will be heading to my bed
    any min now IM trying to let u know
    See now u have done it
    it's started to grow

    Just give me a light and spark the dro...

    she gets up and dances to her favorite song
    stripping down to her pushup and her matching thong
    tattoo of a dragon sliding from her back to her thigh
    she serving up a mean dish of dance hall pie

    she jumps on my lap and slides to and fro
    IM always the boss so I assume control
    I run my hands across her frame and watch her back arch
    I kiss her softly as her lips start to part...
    Python baby I want u so much
    I grin and start to play a song with her thong string
    she is my Spanish guitar hear how she sings

    Play her body note 4 note
    Stroke 4 stroke
    IM the captain of this ship and she is my boat
    dam's and oooh's
    are the lines she use
    Thong pulled to the side
    as we begin this ride
    Mountain high
    valley low
    sweat dripping
    Form fitting
    she is a possessed being
    draining my body
    IM trying really hard but she is taking my best.
    She is trying really hard but this man is blessed
    hair pulling
    chest grabing
    booty smacking
    back scratching
    lamp breaking
    leg shaken
    neighbor wakening
    and who gives a F**K

    We explode in the end and sleep comes on
    I awake in the morning, but baby is gone..... :spinn:

    caramelpython
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think she seduce
    ya
    ya know....lol
    nice flow...
    i think u need :help:
    too...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can say is, Whoa....hot piece here.
     
  4. triniti424

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    uhhhh...LoL :lol:
    hmmmmm...so ummmmm...yeah...Ok lol
    Looks like someone got his dose last night LoL :D
     
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    :blush: Brother, I must say...you do your thang...so well...
    and I see you're keeping your "winter" promise...lol
    this was shall I say..."HOT"...
    ...it's ok...I know your "Gemini" challenged or blessed
    I suppose it's how you look at...
    considering this piece..I would say the latter :D
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    steamy peace!



    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    drop it red hot i feel ya bruh
     
  8. reggaediva

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    JAH BLESSINGS,
    YA SEE THIS PIECE i REALLY DIG MUCH LOVE TO YOU AND ALL THAT YOU DO. YA SEE, YOU ON FIRE BABY. DO IT UP.!!!!!!

    BLESSING INTINUALLY ...ONE LOVE :flamet:
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks my family....

    mzblkangel... yes I was hoodwinked but i loved every min of it..lol thanks 4 the love sis.

    watzinaname... had me up all night :hot: thanks lady

    triniti424 ...LMAO and then some T and then some.... :look:

    angelicsage... :flirt: aaawwwww thanks sage u know how us Gemini's do :devil:

    cocobutterskyn.... Glad u enjoyed my lil flo thanks 4 the love sister

    $$RICH$$... my brother I guess we have to take a seat and enjoy the ride...LOL

    reggaediva.... :devil: is my middel name :hot:
     
  10. true love

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: Is all i can say! Much love!