Black Poetry : . ? !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, Feb 13, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Paragraphs spilled from his lips
    Soaking sheets of silk
    I lay in between his sentences
    engulfed by the elegance of his flow
    I embraced every period
    slithered around curves of each question mark
    I was the point of his exclamation

    his voice stamped me with a captivating word
    tattooing special on my skin
    signing a waiver for this injured heart
    damage undone
    Persisting that I love again
    he fed me aphrodisiacs
    peanuts veiled by chocolate
    inebriating my genes
    causing upheaval in my hormones
    my body surrendered to his poetry



    ©2003amberly
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amberly

    Clever writing Queen!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    i agree with GQ. that was quite clever. keep on doing the dam thang sista!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeeee!
    he did all dat !
    I loved this u worked it to perfection
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow. This was very different and very clever.
    Great writing.
    Keep scribin'
    *Emma*
     
  6. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, this was so nice. Dang, it's HOT up in here. I know we're winning about now...right Kem?!
     
  7. Legacy21

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    *Applauds* Amberly your wordplay is so eloquent and clever, and your images leap off the screen. This was an excellent read!
     
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    FOR WHOM THE BELLE TOLLS

    Very special- terms of endearment! Eloquent flow!

    1poetsought
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go ahead Queen Amberly!

    This was metaphors and synonyms, and symbolisms wrapped in chocolated and dipped in sweet surrender and splendor...had me all the way ...Love it! And it doesn't matter what they say we are hands down some of the tightest writer's on the cyberplanet!
    (snap)(snap)!
    Blessings On Ya House!:toast:
     
  10. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall for the love...



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