Quiet Poetry Lounge : 1 Can Change The World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Feb 24, 2005.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    1 Can Change The World

    1 can change the world
    Despite what we’ve been told,
    And that 1 can be a simple idea
    If its original and bold.

    1 can change the world
    No matter whats been said,
    For 1 man with integrity
    Whole nations have willing bled.

    1 can change the world
    In spite of all the fears,
    1 mother’s love has dried
    A wounded country’s tears.

    1 can change the world
    If you would just believe
    That you could be the 1
    To lead us to achieve.

    --©2/22/05--
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    throughout the fears and how we believe the integrity and what's said
    1 can change the world through hope and wisdom minded and some
    unity wit perspective .........this rings out loud and clear to my ear
    write the truth so the souls may feel the depth of what one can do & change
    Awesome write poet !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The change that a strong conviction can bring, such a wonderful strength in your words oldsoul. Flow on brotha.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very inspiring flow i enjoyed this
     
  6. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Your words is like music for the soul!
    It makes the spirit sing,

    1 can change the world
    If you would just believe
    That you could be the 1
    To lead us to achieve.
     
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