Black Haiku : 1 Breathless Moment

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

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    1 breathless moment i take,
    Just 1 mo step i make,
    2 crawl under dis subway tunnel,
    Smells bad as hell, but i have 2 go under,
    How far should i go across,
    Until my heart beats every last beat,
    I stop and wander off the subway,
    Takin anotha breathless moment to think.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in seventeen vibe
    i scribe breathless unto u
    to walk da chart line
     
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    Flowin as alwayz da rich 1:)

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    indeed i am he
    forth my flowin is 2 be
    i rest within thee
     
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