Black Poetry : 1-4-3.... inspired by Baller

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Oct 8, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    “Baby… I love you”

    (yeah! that’s what he said)

    & the words kept spinnin’
    around in my head…
    I hadn’t heard from him
    in what seemed like…
    too **** long & I was
    certain his feelings for
    me were gone… that
    the love flow had dried
    I mean… I had cried…
    enough tears to replenish a
    small country’s water supply
    & still I wanted to die…
    then be re-born in his arms

    so when he said… I love you

    if you want to know the
    truth… (at first)… it felt like
    déjà vu… in other words…
    I’d heard it all before
    & that’s when he said
    so much more… than my heart
    could have ever been prepared
    for… he told me he wanted to
    make things ryght… apologize
    for all of my sleep-less nyghts
    …for his part in the fyghts
    & for losing syght... of “We”

    then he told me… I love you

    I wasn’t quite sure… of what I
    should do… I had no clue about
    what I would say… so I closed
    my eyes… said a small prayer…
    & let my heart lead the way

    (& to this day… I’m glad I did)

    I said the only thing that
    needed to be said…

    …I love you too.



    ©SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    babygurl...

    ...just the reponse i was lookin' for
    traveling all the way from the Georgia Sun
    to make my day shyne:)
    ran my rainy nights away
    showed me love
    now, i know why i say

    I LOVE YOU.

    so glad i could inspire beauty such as this...THANK YOU.
     
  3. VirtuousDove

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    I love your flow! I know how it feels to question the words I love you, that's why from now on those words are not enough unless the actions match. But I'm glad someone had a happy ending.

    VirtuousDove
     
  4. alyce

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    well

    there's something to be said for kissin and makin up! yeah! And I like the way you said this heah!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sunshyne

    this was beautiful & devine
    lovin yo shyne sweetie:cool:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich-Ne$$. you always say the sweetest things!
    ...& i just be shynin' in the $$RICHNE$$ that is You! :wink:

    Alyce. thanks for the read... i'm glad you enjoyed it!
    you know your responses make a post complete! :)

    VirtuousD. thank you for the comps... & for feelin' me
    on this one. & excuse my manners, but welcome to the fam! :)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B. it was more than just a pleasure... to shyne on
    You... sweet talented brotha! when i read your piece... i
    just couldn't help myself. i love it when i am moved to flow
    with one of my fellow poets!! it's like a natural hygh! :)

    thanks for allowing me the opportunity to be inspired by You!

    (i can exhale now... since i think you like it... :) )

    :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G. A Sr.,

    Brilliant works of art, such as this...... is why, you are a G. A.
    I not only read your poetry.....I HEAR IT!

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    STAYING TRUE

    WORDS ARE YOUR FORTAE SO WRITE ON MY SISTER WRITE ON.........**** THIS **** IS EXCELLENTTTTTTTTTTT AND I SAY THAT WITH PRIDE...................................... TALENTED INDEED!!!!
    :kiss: :kiss:
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hea you go again...

    Raggedy ***! you are disgustingly talented GA... you know I dig it!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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