Black Poetry : …F*cked Up Thoughts…

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This has no real rythym or rhyme to it…just some thoughts…enjoy…

    I sit
    Reminisce
    I stand
    I trip
    I try
    On my own
    To run
    Not slip
    Its hard
    Too dependent
    On things
    On people
    Wanna run
    By myself
    Far away
    By myself
    From the world
    So much hate
    Can u relate?
    To the hate
    That I feel
    Segregation
    Is still
    A relation
    So sad
    All the people
    Won’t know
    Does it show?
    I sit
    I look
    Observe
    The world
    I see
    Pity
    Alarm unfurls
    Am I
    The only one
    Who sees the
    Lonely ones?
    I sit
    What can I do?
    How can I?
    Help you
    I wanna be
    Your everything
    For now I sit
    I reminisce
    Can’t feel like this
    No bliss…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep thoughts
    sometime there is not much
    one can do but sit and watch
    sometime many miss the bliss
    but da heart feel the warmth
    so the thoughts is real
    and what u feel not f up at all
    i hear ya mental working
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i feel this...much love
     
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    yo sis I dont know what you talkin bout...it reads like them thoughts we all have but dont ever say out loud...tyte
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody....i was just thinkin' and writin' one day and this was the outcome...
     
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    Feelin this one!!!! Keep Scribin!!
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sweet journey:)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh man i feel like this at times....
    i love the flow...
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot:)
     
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    how couldn't anyone relate?....loved it j.
     
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