Black Poetry : “Us” sounds so much better

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate your friendship
    But would like more
    I enjoy your conversation
    But would love your touch
    I cherish your presence
    But would honor “us”
    I take pleasure in sleeping over
    But would be delighted in sleeping in your arms
    I like the sound of your voice
    But would be more gratified by the feel of it
    I like to hear you say my name
    But would be more content with you using a tone of urgency
    I like your hands
    But would love to have them hold me
    I love your complexion
    But would like to kill the curiosity of how the both of our complexions would look intertwined in each other
    I like your hair
    But would like it better if it were upon me as you lay between my legs and let me caress it
    I like you as is but would love “us” even more…
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet peace.

    I enjoy reading your work.
    Thanks for sharing.


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both coco and cindy...glad to see you enjoy my work coco and cindy so happy i could grace your face with a smile you two have a wonderful day!
     
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    *quoting myself*
    "how did you filter my soul
    into the ink of your pen
    and simply
    write everything
    in me?"


    oooohhh girl! you wrote my soul straight up. i feel this to the billionth power1
    :toast:

    keep scribing sis!

    diva08
     
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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad to see you "felt" this one....lol thanks for the love
     
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    Ladybug!

    This was lovely!!! no doubt.

    Reas
     
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    Beautifully written. Great peace.
    *Emma*
     
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    this is a sweet, gentle, kind of soothing flow....being in love and not being seen as a lover....


    K
     
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    l love this one! kind of reminds me of that movie 'Brown Sugar'.

    peace.........
     
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