Black Poetry : “not against flesh and blood”

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Mar 21, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every waking moment of every day
    the voices they do call
    calling me
    calling me
    they know me and I know them
    sometimes I pull up a chair and entertain them for a while
    sometimes I see them coming pull out my gun
    and try to run
    but they know me
    and they will always come again
    they seem to know my every movement
    every dream nightmare or fantasy

    There is one I fear the most for he is
    A kindred spirit
    And trusted ally of old
    His advice has saved many a life
    Of mine is not the least

    He is the voice of REASON
    His advice true and clear
    But sometimes he can talk me into some fetid ****
    You know! dumb **** 911 ****……
    And when I ask him in mornings light
    What the HELL was that all about!
    He just laughs and says
    “WASN’T ME”
    but I swear he was their?
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can dig this flow...

    (it would've helped had i known what "fetid" meant) :D
     
  3. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** !

    Shaz man you know Im in the car witchu on this one ....look to your right ...see ...Im right there...4 real !! tyght extra tyght scribe poet.

    peace
    g-man
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling

    THE REASON OF VOICE
    for there IS a reason
    behind EVERYTHING
    but is may like logic

    peace
    my brutha

    dsSNy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff felt dis here and i know da depth of it all...nice flow
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J’hiah
    Thanks for the read

    GYPSYMAN
    Glad you can relate man god to know I isn’t the only one hearing these voices (lol)

    Da Street So’ja
    Yes there is a reason even if we don’t know what it is

    $$RICH$$
    thanks for the read
     
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