Quiet Poetry Lounge : “Loves Mental”

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AHMOSE, Apr 15, 2005.

  1. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You taken
    Husband in the making
    Kids got you shaking
    Cause they not waiting
    Married yes you are
    To my mind so near yet so far
    Beautiful yes you are

    Sow the seeds of your love for me in my womb
    For they are strong enough to travel the distance of my vagina.
    Let them grow in its soil...and I will bear your fruit.
    Take the virginity of my heart
    Take the virginity of my mind
    Take the virginity of my emotions
    Married yes I am Married yes we are
    So near yet so far our love has showed just who we are.....


    By Godssoulja a.k.a Bruce Benjamin Jr & Afiya Orara
    :hearts4:Copyright ©2000 - 2005 Afroetic Ministries:hearts4:
     
  2. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice scribe..beautiful lyrical display of serene intimacy
     
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    Nice...

    Beauty captured at one of its finest moments... wonderful post poet. Much appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was outstanding reminds me of a series i wrote call
    confession of da womb !
    this was tyte and very well laid out to canvas ...............
     
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    You have captured that dance called love, peace.
     
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    Married to each others minds...I'm loving the concept here, and the collaborative flow.
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got tihs one down!! beautiful scribe,
    interesting collabo!!

    much love, plain
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Family,

    For allowing me to show you that love is mental. I dedicate this to all the lovers out their in the diaspora....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and it's well accepted within
    thank u from da heart !
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay, let me say...you got that one off, it was well layed out quite mentally. thanks for sharing it.