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    Khasm13 : ghetto

    god **** boy.. This poem goes hard.
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    Poetry Critiques : Until Then

    Anymore Critiques?
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    Poetry Critiques : Countdown...

    All I gotta say is ****. Tell him he better ride out :horse:
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    Poetry Critiques : Until Then

    To let you all know.. This was a poem I wrote to my ex girlfriend Yanna, when her and I were going out.. Just to clear that up. When I picture a woman with beauty and love you are the first image I think of You are the foundation of my affection and out of all my worldly desires you are...
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    StiLL In Love

    Well.. you probably have heard this a million times.. But, don't try to pressure her too much.. If you show too much attactment, girls may get annoyed.. Same thing about when she started to say I love you to you, might be happenin' to her right now.. Seems to me she kind of scared you off...
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    I don't know if I should do this..

    oh well....
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    Poetry Critiques : Here in America(Spoken Word)

    I think thats a great spoken word piece.. None of the rhyme was forced, and it made a lot of sense.. You didn't contradict yourself on any line from my pov.
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    I don't know if I should do this..

    well I'm not goin' no where.. So, get used to me.
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    I don't know if I should do this..

    I know, cedric.. And thanks for your tolerance.. I already done admitted I was wrong and tried to apologize for what I had said. Nothin' else I can do.
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    I don't know if I should do this..

    Hah, I haven't left yet Sek.. And your words aren't making me take my leave.
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    I don't know if I should do this..

    your words are speaking of hate towards me james.. You speak all this hard crap, but I haven't been banned yet.. And you keep following me.. You are the arrogant one. Even if I did go on white racism forums, you all would just say I did it because you told me to, and you would just find...
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    I don't know if I should do this..

    Yeah, I figured they would.. But oh well.. I mean, I tried to make peace.. And apologized for my comment that they didn't like too much and took it the wrong way.. I don't want to just leave and look like another one of those white people that you guys have mentioned.. Even if I am not wanted here.
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    Black People : The African-American Missionary

    I'm trying to stop the conflict.. as it isn't fixing anything.. I mean, I'll admit it.. I did come to you all wrong, and you're right.. I'm young, and I guess I don't see what I said in the same way as you older people view it.. But this fighting isn't fixing the problem that everyone has...
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    Poetry Critiques : To Live For (Spoken Word)

    Thanks to all of you for giving me feedback.. Because of the conflict I have ran into with a lot of the males on this site, which I didn't intend for my comments to go that way, I didn't expect such positive feedback. Thanks once again, Young Poet
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    Black People : Just a Question

    until I am physically removed from the site.. You're going to have to cope with it.. Finally got some feedback on my poetry.. And when I get bored.. I rome around the site.. Which means I'm going to read what I please.
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