My 2 cents
I'm new to your forum and enjoying it. I think adding the Etiquette is quite useful.
It is always gratifying to receive feedback for writers.
However, I think "feedback" needs to be clarified. I thought it fair to do some browsing of other members' work and added feedback to...
interesting piece
thought-provoking piece...just a suggestion but with that great title more could be done with the dressing imagery that "all gussied up" suggests.
thx for your response to my work,
seawoman
*one of my favourite pieces...enjoy!
Pantherlike, he loped past me with a wink.
The shiny dome beckoning
To my womanliness
Strikes a chord within
And a smile without.
Unbidden comes an image
Of tenderly cradling that head
Between breasts.
How is it that a black man
Bares...
Let us lift each other high, especially when we get tired.
Peace & blessings,
seawoman
DON'T
*****
Don't let Them
Define your being
Dictate your pace
Decide your fate
Dare to succeed.
Copyright (C) Sandra E. Morris, 1998
Published in www.blackplanet.com...
SEA JAZZ
Sea Jazz
Sea jazz is…
The rolling crash of shoreline cymbals
At each salty climax.
The mnemonic note of the sax
Wailing against a backdrop of azure blues.
The frothy pianissimo of low tide
Tickling the shells of my earlobes.
The cool splash of the soloist...
Peace & blessings to you all! Do any of you have Caribbean roots or were affected by visiting the Caribbean? Then post your work here....
Much love,
Seawoman
:)
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