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    Black Poetry : ...in lyric Minor

    I bought the vinyl of “What’s Going On?” a few days Before 9/11…prophetic?…foreshadowing?…maybe… …the blending of his voice and the looped plays of the towers’ tumble made my ex cry…I sat silent…questioning my patriotism…and the remorse in my spirit…wondering if it was original…or an...
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    Black Poetry : in a silent way (for the gods and unborn children)

    j'hiah & 1poetsought... thank you both for taking the time to read and reply to my piece. I think i'm finally starting to like Destee (not that i ever hated it here...i mean...i've said too much already :D) ?
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    Black Poetry : in a silent way (for the gods and unborn children)

    thank you for replying, love. you know how i feel about posting online lately, but i guess this is an extreme time...and i wanted to let my feelings on the issue be known. ?
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    Black Poetry : A Message to My Destee brother and sisters...

    i echo the general sentiment of the replies in this post. all i can do is hope that our soldiers (especially those i know personally) come home safely. And, when that happens, i hope the focus will shift towards ousting this idiot of a president, just like we citizens did to his father 12...
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    Black Poetry : in a silent way (for the gods and unborn children)

    …in a silent way… our soldiers continue to be empowered with certain inalienable abilities to send the innocent to their graves…and the powers who move the chess pieces from ivory towered-incantations of a warped constitution, smile, letting the crude oil slip from their lips …wishing...
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    Black Poetry : ...when diplomacy fails.

    it's nice to see that you've followed my advice :) this piece is an example as to why you're too good of a poet to not expand outside of the love genre. keep holding it down with the revolutionary sh*t :D
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    Black Poetry : Behind the Sun

    "I am a dreamer of dreams..." Nikki Giovanni can you dream dreams? I mean, can you slide your body underneath fantasia fabrics & relax the visions of real life until imagination is born? Dreamer of dreams...you, soldier of souls, maker of music everytime your smile shows ...you...
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    Black Poetry : speculative

    I write poetry…and listen to good music…to keep the apocalypse from coming down. Yeah, I said I write poetry…and listen to head-nod soul-lyric music…to keep the apocalypse from coming down. The end times are near when…hip-hop’s been *****-punked…and writings are owned by corporate masters...
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    Black Poetry : indigopoem: release.

    i read this last night while we were on the phone...i chose to save my words until this morning, when i had time to think about the peace... i feel somewhat uncomfortable trying to comment on this poem, because the sentiment speaks for itself, and it does not warrant any stylistic...
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    Black Poetry : indigopoem: breathe.

    why you biting off of me?? :D nah seriously, i thoroughly enjoyed this piece, though when you told me about it, i thought you were going to flip your style a little bit...still love it, but just letting you know what i was thinking about this... you know i'm no good with replies, but...
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    Black Poetry : october requited

    thanks for the responses, everybody. I'm glad that you enjoying basking in the glow of elayne having my nose wide open :D and layna...thank you for coming home and giving me inspiration to write this...i love you. and i love you too, sherrie...crazy *** :D
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    Black Poetry : october requited

    i smell the haiku on your skin ...lines written in october colors smile on the tip of your tongue when it enters my mouth. i am awaiting you in the dark. we shed tears knowing our reunion is no more than an interlude to our 700 mile solitude in love. and still ...i find time in...
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    Black Poetry : ...as they lay.

    i like this :D though i thought you were gonna flip it on some erotic type vibe...cuz i know how you do :) I really loved this one, baby... like i always tell you....you're elevating ;)
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    Black Poetry : ...say yes.

    :D of course I will allow unrestricted access into me, baby...i mean, why wouldn't? you are so beautiful...i love this piece...and i love you too :)
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    Black Poetry : ...say my name.

    elayne... now, i COULD go ahead and speculate as to what event sparked this piece....but that wouldn't be right :) this is one of my favorite pieces from you (no b.s.)...I loved the wordplay, the images :D...you're the sh*t, baby I love you
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