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    Black Poetry : NEVERENDING...

    havnent posted in here in long time...hope u enjoy Who was i to critizie the path outlined by the icy tears i cried for in my heart jesus died rosary beads and holy water baptized the soul of a lamb and body of a lion see i was not who they saw for skin so often covered my...
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    Black Poetry : Look At Yourself

    this was a really good piece.. very real..its the kinda thing that alot of people think about but dont write about......i love the subject myself and write about it all the time..in order to find oneself u have to look for yourself.... :flamet:
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    Black Poetry : L.Y.F.E. (Loving You For Eternity)

    this was a good piece right here i like the repetition at the end..i wonder would it would sound like if u did a piece like that the whole way threw.... nice job UPin
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    Black Poetry : IT'S THE SAME OLD SAD STORY

    very stong and consestent from top to bottom..cant say that i agree with you on every thing u talked about but i really liked the piece would make for a nice spoken word... nice job
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    Black Poetry : Broken Inside (not official title)

    this wasnt bad...seems very emotional and is structured very well..however i think that u should go over it again and cut out some of the rough edges and add a bit more...made for a good read though nice job
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    Black Poetry : RuBbErBaNd MaN

    this was clever rich...when i saw the title i was siggin the song...lol can feel this piece on so manmy levels nice to see some of your work...its been a while since i'be been around
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    Black Poetry : Hope Through A Seed (Mind~$oul & lpoet Collab)

    wow..thanks for all the love
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    Black Poetry : Is It Just Me

    i like this...the flow was on point...and no its not ust u i 2 have noticed this.....keep it up
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    Black Poetry : i cry for heaven

    i 2 cry for heaven to come quickly beautiful piece
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    Black Poetry : Her Testimony My Shame

    thanks
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    Black Poetry : only heaven

    this is nice...a lot different from some of the stuff i'm acustomed to seeing on here...i like it keep it up
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    Black Poetry : she was a writer...

    this was mad creative...really liked how u approaced this wasnt expecting the end though And realized The fusion of she and I Would never be So…I walked away Feeling incomplete Without reason Coz I knew going in She wasn’t the one for me. Still… She made her mark...
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    Black Poetry : Her Testimony My Shame

    thanks yall
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    Black Poetry : This Mourning

    usually dont like long pieces but this kept my attention great drop
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    Black Poetry : The Naw Not Me Philosophy

    interesting piece...like how u put it together
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