Thank you Diamond for this piece and all of the others you have here today. I am so enjoying your flow today. On this day of Thanks I thank God for all the talent he has given to you and all others on this page, hope you don't mind me speaken that here on your post.
redlady, this was a beautiful sad read, I agree with Kitana. Actually makes me angry too. I liked these lines particularly....
"at the moment I heard my heart break
tiny pices fell to the ground
millions of shards all around"
"and how sometimes I try to put the pieces back together...
$$RICH$$ You know you can fly, fall or stay right where ever you land, this here Destee place is all your land. I am glad you took the fall with me and liked this piece.
PoeticAlize- thank you for stopping by and enjoying my drift. I appreciate it a lot.
mslusciousb-Hope you two do get it sorted out. I like this piece, it is so true, men have that way of double speak, we woman just want to know what can we do? But if they don't know or can't tell then well.........?
This is so well scribed touching all the points on domestic violence. This is a wonderful poem about a horrible situation that we all know someone in. The statstics are stagering and from my work I know how devastating to the casualties this way of life is. This poem should be on billboards on...
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