Recent content by choclatefantasy

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    Black Poetry : I Forgive and Let Go, I Live

    Thanx 4 the feedback. I jus let go of a long time grudge and it feels so good, so i had 2 write about it.
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    Black Poetry : Now your *** is missing this......

    i liked that! that was hot!
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    Black Poetry : Poetry in the Flesh

    I enjoyed that flow. It captured how i think most feel. Keep up the good work.
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    Black Poetry : I Forgive and Let Go, I Live

    I forgive and let go, I live I fly away from my pain No longer having to feel this rain Which continuously runs down my face Floating through my thoughts in my mind Wondering will they be joyous at any time I forgive and let go, I live All the pain that someone caused me Is not a burden...
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    Black Poetry : Stupid Again

    thanx, it was just raw emotion. sorry for the banned words, i was just a little angry.
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    Black Poetry : Stupid Again

    A piece of a** was all I was to you Thought you really felt for me, but that wasnt true You made me feel like I was special Bought me meals and s*** Did some nice things for me Even licked my c*** Thought you were different But you're the same Once again I look stupid Fallin for that...
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    Black Poetry : I wonder

    that poem was hot! it captured how i feel most of the time! keep it up girl!
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    Black Poetry : I must have been a fool

    I feel u completely on this poem. This is exactly how I felt about my exboyfriend when we broke up a month ago. Don't worry u will get through it. This poem was great. It not only helps us know how u feel but for those who feel like that you capture it.
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    Black Poetry : Panties Wet

    Excellent flow! U grasped the feeling perfectly and I know exactly how u feel at those moments! Keep it up!
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    Black Poetry : He could be reached

    This poem was very deep. I loved it!
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    Black Poetry : Continuous Heartache

    Fallin so hard for these boys With no trust in my heart Is slowly drivin me crazy And tearing my life apart Holdin back sniffles and tears That I have suppressed for so long Is causing me so much stress That soon my mind will be gone I need to stop letting these boys Constantly beat...
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    Black Poetry : Boy I'm Feelin You

    I'm so into you I can feel it through my body, mind, and soul Boy I'm feelin you Ooh I love your smile The way you move plus your style Boy I'm feelin you When I see your face my mind drifts away Dreaming of the day you will be my baby Boy I'm feelin you I vision being the girl on...
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    Black Poetry : He Told Her

    Thanx to everyone for the positive response to this poem. The funny thing about it is I wrote this poem b4 this even happened to me 4 real.
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    Black Poetry : How come

    How come when I see you I feel so blue How come after all this time I can't get over you How come when I look at you You look with such disgust How come when you look at me My eyes feel w/ lust How come when I think of you I want to break down and cry How come when you ignore me I...
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    Black Poetry : He Told Her

    He told her he loved her and would always be there That nothing could change that and he would always care He told her that no one could ever take her place That his love was too strong and could never be erased He told her that the thing that bothered him the most is that she didn't...
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