knowing is
a heart full of scarlet flowers
is a strong woman's heart
your poem says
you know who you are
which is so much more than so many know these days -
including myself
it is good to read the strength in your lines.
I understand
the fierceness
of unconforming
of not giving in
to not become
as so many others
for whatever reason
I hope always:
you keep to this poem
as it is written precisely
One Star
Shrouds the orange sky
what understands billions of years
what can be counted on
to outlive you
to live longer than
the fireflies you love
but- no billions of anything
lasting or otherwise
will uncolor
what you long for
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I love the lilt and the hope and the flowing gloriousness
in this writing you have posted here.
the voice you own is consistent and meaning full
of light and beauty
it is a lovely sharing.
namaste<:
for your kindness in reply to my poetry
thank you all so very much
I appreciate that you took time to read this poem-
that you liked its flow.
certainty
thank you
you are all so very kind to comment on my poem
and for the invite into voice chat
I have never done voice chat online or anywhere in fact
but one day maybe I will feel brave enough to stop in.
certainty
a lovely poem
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pastime has only one t
this is an outstanding lovely poem.
I am glad I didn't miss seeing it here.
the voice is consistent and the images
flow into each other softly and they glitter.
beautiful question
Maybe your king is
in the first star you see rising
or in the sigh of wind
over your skin in summer -
where ever he is,
it is a beautiful asking
you have posted here.
I loved reading your poem.
Just as easily as she loved her own-
Rossi could love a white child.
I talked to her
about greasing my legs
and braiding my hair.
No one but Rossi ever
called me honeychild.
On slow afternoons,
and long before her house caught fire,
I decorated mud pies for Rossi.
Rossi and my...
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