Chaos reigns inside of me..
Living the illusion of ecstasy.
all their hopes;
all their conceited dreams, ill-fed.
their lives bred in hypocrisy,
As I race through darkened streets
dash through crimson flooded alleys
my sense of urgency keeping fear at bay
I glance ahead keeping destination in sight
my friends, my family far beyond me
my goal, my steps beside their own
I race onward toward the same
my steps faltering..
I halt in...
I really felt your work.. I believe we all feel this way at times... I have been writing for seven years although i am only eighteen. and many of those months were filled with me scratching my head... thanks for putting into words what many of us were thinking...
I'm sorry but I must disagree. A word is just a word... Nothing in this world is absolute. A person's viewpoint and opinions make all the difference. I understand where you are coming from.. but such drastic measures? I hate the word *****.. ******... i had never understood the word...
That is the main problem... our people have been reduced to animals... teenagers no longer think.. they imitate.. And all they have been given a bunch of worthless examples to imitate. No one wants to think for themselves... the group rules everything now... it is about...
I saw my name somewhere.... Can't exactly remember where at this point but when the time came to choose my screen name it entered my mind..... i thought to myself that i wouldn't use it unless it could symbolize something... so i came up with this..
Bio = life..... so i called myself life's...
Thank you... I really appreciate your comments... I have been writing for a very long while now... and you are the few that i have come across who accurately critiqued one of my poems.... yes i found the rhythm.. to be unstable... Yes i am also known for being wordy.... My english teacher many...
I doubt that they do..... considering myself.. I know that if i were to have a child with someone out of my race... one of the considerations wouldn't have been if she could do the childs hair... I mean.. yeah its selfish... but you made me think... does anyone whether interacial... or same race...
We began our journey not knowing what we perceived,
both knowing what we wished to achieve....
I saw hope in your beauty,
Your thoughts on my mind,
I saw love’s integrity,
Your thoughts all on time.
We began filled with delusion
presuming how the story would go,
arms outstretched vainly seeking help.
seeing hope I yell out.
only at the last realizing its vanity,
realizing my hope
was only false dreams,
realizing my love
could never have been as real as it seemed.
And as I fall...
slowly being submerged by the sea..
my tears rain...
her eyes: dark depths of the ocean, life giving
her heart: natures rhythmic nurturing- a mother’s pure call
her voice: sugar sweet, lingering peace of a chocolate delight
her mind: brilliant as brightly colored rainbows filling barren skies
her soul: flames burning bright...
Hmmm... I took the PSAT and SAT.... I didn't do to well on the sat but on the PSAT My scores were at least better than 85% of students graduating the same year that i did....
the problem with tests of that calibur... is that for students who are taking higher level courses the tests are almost...