Black Poetry : Why I Feel The Way I Do

[Aaliyahmonet]

Thank U All

Thank you all for the love and support. I'll be back with a new piece soon, so be on the lookout. Much love and god bless.


AM

 

[HODEE]

A Fantastic Piece

I sit down constantly and start thinking to myself,
What do I want to do in terms of love,
Could there be someone thats destined to be with me,
Or am I just stuck in my outer shell,
Sometimes i get these strange feelings like im fallin,
And other times i feel that im just being too lonely,
I cherish the memories that i endured so much,
That smile, that last kiss, that everlasting touch,
And then i wonder, why i feel the way i do,
At night i sit by my bedside window, and look up at the stars,
I think to myself, wondering where he could be,
Someone that could love me and cherish the moments,
When we start to make love, i look in his eyes and wonder,
Why do I love you so much, how could this be for real,
We are together now isnt that the way its suppose to be,
While im making love to you, you're giving your love to me,
I wish that he was here with me right now,
I would give him everything and anything he wanted,
But then again i want to be sure of myself, and be happy,
And then I wonder, why i feel the way I do.

Aaliyahmonet



(This is a new piece i just worked on, i know its been awhile since i last posted, but im making a huge comeback. Thank you Destee Fam for all the love you've shown me over these years. I love you.)

A beautiful flow Aaliyahmonet

" I cherish the memories that i endured so much,
That smile, that last kiss, that everlasting touch,
And then i wonder, why i feel the way i do, "

Guys feel it too.
As a man I feel this way as well.
We long when the special heart isn't there
To hold
To cherish and spoil
To kiss and touch
Sometimes thinking... why am I feeling this way?:weird:

Thank you for the drop.. hurry back home sister. You are missed

 

[sweet apple*pie]

Your commentary was beautiful Hodee...

Lovely, heartfelt and pure...

Yes...I find myself in the walls of this poem right now...."what is it that I want from love?" I ask myself, and " am I ready for it?"

Thanks for bringing this back.

 

[HODEE]

Your commentary was beautiful Hodee...

Lovely, heartfelt and pure...

Yes...I find myself in the walls of this poem right now...."what is it that I want from love?" I ask myself, and " am I ready for it?"

Thanks for bringing this back.

sweet apple*pie
If your experiencing uncertainty. That is normal
I left you a four part Compilation
I wrote and dedicate to you in your blog.
I posted to your poem on Sensuality.
Spread your wings and bless like only you can!

Aaliyahmonet
Has a gift of bringing the reader into where she is and it is always beautiful.