(i've not submitted a piece...this month... occupied with nothing!) --------------------------------- i just know... that this life can be hard seems when you feel low down someone is lower down... that you... yeah, someone has it worst than you... situations change us... the "i" we thought we knew... yet, when life came rushing in... we collapsed under the force... i... loved you like i should gave you everything my heart could give...and then some yet... in the end...i was standing alone looking at the concrete as my heart lay there... beating its last beats... i gave my life so that we... yes, we...would be happy one night, you stolen my happiness...like a thief... you benefited from all that i am... i just know...next time as life rushes in...i will brace myself...fighting the forceful tides... i will use my brown hands... which i use for giving... to cover the area to protect my heart... from loving one...like you... MsDLite (c) 08.01
The image of a woman with her brown hands... hands she uses for 'giving'...cupped against that place where her heart is, to protect it from the pain of love...moves my insides in ways I can't describe here. You paint the portraits for my mental, for my soul. thank you a
i came... i read... i understood. YET, i disagree. LOVE is that special place that require the whole of us not a protected portion of us we must trust in another to do what is right not act like a thief in the middle of the night so, we give our all not a portion of us we give our soul not a little of us we give our heart to that special one we pray, each night that our heart is returned WHOLE. that's the nature of the beast. One.
Unappreciated love.. Selfish mis treating love Lame forever forgiving love Dont need that kind of love. Well MSD that was a strong flow.. Thanks for that.. I enjoyed every second of it...