Black Poetry : She was sweet to me.

James,

Pretty little gem, this. I love the dichotomy. She seems to be exhibiting love but he's only reminded of an earlier time.

Reading this I was mindful that some of the more vivid memories are those that involve motion. She is totally and fully animated. Beautiful and simplistic imagery. Lovely read.

(smile)


Thanks Kiwanda,

I appreciate that you got that. The implication is very quick.. subtle..
I didn't realize it myself initially. It reminds me of the another piece.. "Fine"..
where his subject and hers are so disconnected.. it's like they are walking
side by side, but in two different emotional dimensions. I would love to hear
her side too.. but it doesn't come.
 

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