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Black Poetry : Love Art

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Feb 9, 2003.

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    Kitana

    Kitana Active Member MEMBER

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    do you remember
    when we
    first got together
    you asked me
    the way to my heart~
    because you wanted
    to start loving me
    from the first time
    you saw me~
    and I told you
    to just let me be me
    and love me freely
    and the rest would
    just fall into place~
    and I told you
    if you could
    trace around the outline
    of my heart
    your image is
    what you'd find
    because until you
    I never thought
    real love
    would ever be mine~
    but from the first time
    I saw you
    I was hypnotised
    into knowing
    that you and me
    were meant to be~
    sounds a little bit cliche
    but I knew from the first day
    that we would be together
    for always~
    and even though
    you're gone
    your memory still
    lingers on
    and the imprint of
    your face
    is still indelibly traced
    upon my heart~
    an undying work
    of love art
    to remind me
    that you
    and I
    will never die

    (c) nfn
     
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    Kitana

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    Elmo...the administrators will not take any notice of a little red furry muppet with a high giggly voice...now get back to muppetland:D
     
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    kt.


    now this... was sweet!
    & i could just feel that it was truly written
    with your whole heart! i guess i'm not the
    only one who believes that true love never
    dies. thanks for sharing!! :)

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn

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    Ms. K

    you done took it to a whole nudda level. this was a great show of true love and hope for the rest of us that once you experience true true love it will never die no matter what. Great flow



    One
     
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    gurl u open up da love doorz here
    very nice flow.........I love it
     
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    Love

    Very nice!! I don't do many love poems and usually don't read many but I really like this one, love the flow and its not too mushy. this is a great piece of work. digging it fa sho



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    Kitana, I really enjoyed this flow. As I was reading a certian couple came to mind...Mr Dash and Aaliyah. Very nice and heartfelt.
     
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    this one belongs in heaven somewhere...

    love it.
     
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    Kitana

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    layne..if emotionalist is a word..then that's me..I think love really does make the world go round..and it's the greatest feeling in the world...:heart:

    Rich..you are always so sweet with your replies...thank you

    Elmo..I accept your compliment graciously..and don't make me laugh..you, get in touch with your feminine side...hah!!

    amberly...then I feel honoured that you liked my peace enough to reply...it's much appreciated..

    Kemetstry...then don't talk about it..do it...actually I would like to see some love poetry from you:)

    Sista Steele....thank you so much for reading and feeling what I have written...

    j'hiah...I think I've told you this before....but I'll say it again..you are a sweetheart..thank you...

    K
     
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    "The art of love"

    So eloquently scribed...lovely as usual, Kitana.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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