Black Poetry : Life

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  1. candeesweet Well-Known Member

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    The flight I've taken to
    Get caught in a steel screen
    Once free to become lost in the home of breeze
    Seeing new atmosphere wandering
    What's in there?
    Finding the familiar crack but never entering
    Not paying attention while flying in the breeze
    Entering but bot knowing the act of going in until then
    Immediantly becoming apart of my not knowing where I'm entering
    Turning immediantly around which is also new
    Usually just fundalmental gentle curves to stay
    I do remember the trials my momma once taught me
    But she's on the othersidde of this screen
    What to do?
    Pacing seeing all the holes in thee
    Whay am I over you, please do for me & I will
    leave
    My soul is now here
    No longer where there was.
    See my fellow insects
    How I just want to go on and on.
    I'm stuck in here figuring for the first where to go from here
    I've heard of others speak of being flushed out.
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    I feel this way too.
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