Black Poetry : in bittersweet memory

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  1. bahati Member

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    so soft to the touch
    milk chocolate sweet
    still more addictive
    than hershey's
    stronger aphrodisiac
    than vanilla
    and oysters together
    caramel color
    butter pecan - either way -
    have me crazy
    contemplating -
    ooooh - our bubble bath
    in candle light
    eyes deep like an ocean
    to drown in
    luscious lips
    have me delirious
    like a drug
    can't live without
    bahati, Jul 4, 2003
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    Hi bahati, :wave:

    This is a wonderfully written piece. Very descriptive. I like it alot!!

    You are so right, love is like a drug that we cannot do without!!

    Much peace to you!!

    Welcome to the family!! I look forward to reading more of your work!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
    Sierra, Jul 4, 2003
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  3. triniti424 Well-Known Member

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    I know someone wit lips like that...jus yummy :) Glad I went through the files to find this one :)
    triniti424, Aug 12, 2003
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    nice scribe :D
    SwtT, Aug 12, 2003
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    very nice flow ........taste lips
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