Black Poetry : Black Brother

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jelli, Aug 13, 2001.

  1. jelli New Member

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    I want to love a black brother
    but I don't think he loves me
    I want to love a black brother
    for all that he can be.

    I want to love a black brother
    I want to give him respect.
    I want to love a black brother
    but respect me I think he forgets.

    I want to love a black brother
    and treat him like a king
    I want to love a black brother
    but I don't think he sees me as his queen.

    I want to love a black brother
    because I know his potential is strong.
    I want to love a black brother
    I want to love him long.

    COPYRIGHT© 2001 jelli 8/8/2001

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    Feel ya Jelli!!! Keep it flowin' ma!!!

    Peace
    GQ
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    me too.....
    Nice flow~
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    nice flow

    this was very sweet

    pd


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    peacenmanyblessings
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    baller PREMIUM MEMBER

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    FIRST...

    find a brutha who's on the same level...at the same stage...want the same things...in the same arena as you are...then, love him to death.

    pain is caused by two people...on different planes of existence...trying to stand together as one. it won't work.

    know where you are...then find a companion that's in the same space.

    peace.

    BY THE WAY, THE RIVER IS AIIGHT.