Black Haiku : Able to See

Discussion in 'Black Poetry Haiku' started by watzinaname, Jul 11, 2005.

  1. watzinaname New Member

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    As soon as you walked
    in, I was able to see
    a ray of sunshine
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    I walk with eyes closed
    you were able to reach me
    cause you touched my mind
  3. watzinaname New Member

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    Loved that haiku Kente...

    Able to see how
    the mind works and loving how
    each of your thoughts flow
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    You started it Watz!!! : )

    Each thought that is formed
    erased by thoughts of seeing
    you here in my arms
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    Being held in your
    arms I am able to see
    woven tapestry