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Old 11-08-2009, 01:09 AM
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Free Chill

Free my ***** chill once accused of assualt

But it aint his fault we all got our struggles

Tussling with demons with good reason

No wonder why he was charged with treason

Play double agent to those in ya inner circle like they foes doesn't make sense

Whats worse was the rape charges

You had the nerve to say it was me to cover the fact

That u stole my innocence but to top off was the charges of abuse

The truth in which you can't face knowing that its fact

Did what u did with the hopes that i'd never comeback

In the same instance in which you stole my innocence

You locked me in the room n athough i eventually was freed

I walked a lonely road unsure of who i was to be

Emoitions like bitterness deprived me of my happiness

All this time i was afraid to turn you in cause of what you did

But yet there came a time i had to go for mine seek justice

The strength i mustered but seeing you again left me flusterd

In fear the tears came but Courage i weild

On the witness stand i testify the young boy who too shy to speak

Gives total acess in how chill ****** him over

Chill tries to say it was the liquor he wasn't walking around sober

Futile excuse to blemish truth i stand as the verdict is handed down

Shining down in vengence has chill is handed a life sentence

Victory is achieved but a feeling lingers in me

As if im wrong for accusations i question was it really him

well the lights were dim so i don't know

Deeper for the truth i search go back to the day of hurt i travel

Thru exploration of my mentals the light shedded

That he wasn't the guilty suspect at hand

I was my own crook i preplexed myself into the hole i was in

Allowed myself to sink deeper played the role of the grim reaper

Its only now that i see a clear path

But the verdict was handed down i hope its not too late to change the past

So i come before asking please say you will

That you'll free my ***** chill...Free my ***** chill
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Old 11-08-2009, 11:35 AM
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meditating...

as we grow, we come to realize that, IF WE WANT TO DO THE RIGHT THING, WE HAVE TO PUT OUR PAST BEHIND US. that means, putting those friends who are into that other world, behind us as well. it's not about turning your back on WHERE YOU'RE FROM, it's about becoming that person you want to be. like an addict who's trying to overcome his addiction, he stays away from temptation.

PERSONALLY, i'm not about going to jail for anyone. and A TRUE FRIEND wouldn't let you take the rap for something HE DID. on the other hand, we wouldn't want to accuse our friends FALSELY...just to free ourselves.

COMPELLING FLOW.
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Old 11-08-2009, 01:23 PM
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Thanks....This actually has more of a metaphorical meaning

Chill represents all the negativity in my past...all the bitterness anger n what not tht i felt

But in the end i cnt totally put chill @ fault for what happened a lot of it was me
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Old 11-08-2009, 01:34 PM
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Nice work!
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Old 11-08-2009, 01:45 PM
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often we hold our past in our future and we sometime need to chill away from
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Old 11-08-2009, 11:16 PM
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