Scribeaboutit! It helps.
CCBSKYN :heart:

I was so glad to see that this story ended the way it did...

too often people let pride get in the way and they lose out on the deal...

K

sherykah~
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm kinda pleased with it myself.
You know how difficult it is for my to STOP writing. :laugh:
:jumping: Yippy! I did it my first short, short story. :jumping:

Thank you for being you. :)

Kitana~
You are so right. It's funny to me how just saying a few words,
"I'm sorry, forgive me" can help build a relationship,
but like you said, "pride gets in the way."
It's nice to see you read my story. I dig your storytelling talent.

I thank you both for taking time to read and respond.
It's appreciated. :)


CCBSKYN :heart:

Straightforward blueprint of the "young thug dilemma"...
glad to see this one end on a positive note...
funny how a little love sometimes can counteract a lifetime of pain..nice story Cocoa ...keep writing !

peace
g-man

tyght story i enjoyed it

you may not remember me but i use to be a friend of yours until you decided to choose another. i really like this story i to have a story to tell about being abanded by every man that came into my life starting with my father first love dontlive here no more for no man i wish i could love another man but i have to continue to work on me one day at a time. (scandalis)

GYPSYMAN,

"funny how a little love sometimes can counteract a lifetime of pain.."

So true. Thanks for peeking in.


$Rich$, I'm happy you enjoyed the read.

charleshandy, This story was centered around a father and son, but daughters need their fathers in their lives also. I'm glad you like the story.

I appreciate each of you for taking time to read and respond.
Madd Love

Scribeaboutit! It helps.
CCBSKYN :heart:

it was coco lishious to my mental