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GYPSYMAN
03-18-2002, 05:20 PM
She sat in shadow
he strolled through fall with her friend
murder found a home.







On A Continuous Journey
Gypsyman

Destee
03-18-2002, 07:01 PM
WoW !!!! :eeek:

An entire story ... in 3 little lines !!!!

Great Work!

Joyce
03-18-2002, 11:04 PM
:spinn: I
:spinn: Really
:spinn: Love
This :spinn: Uniquely
:spinn: Written
:spinn: Haiku


Your sista in Haiku...Joyce

Hunter
03-25-2002, 11:41 PM
what an excellent piece!!

That last line was most powerful!

$$RICH$$
03-26-2002, 12:06 AM
outstanding haiku u flowed ........beautiful story

cocobutterskyn
03-29-2002, 11:09 PM
crime of passion
deep and spills
the truth.

I agree with Destee
this a short story :)
Very good.

Poetically Turn'd Out!
CCBSKYN :heart:

epiphany
03-30-2002, 09:41 AM
Gypsy..
as usual...your poetry
speaks volumes of life's issues..deep haiku

Epiphany :heart:

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