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thepoetsean

03-17-2002, 07:32 PM

inhale and it seems
time ticks, captivating me
and then i exhale.

sean.

$$RICH$$

03-17-2002, 09:47 PM

breathing da open air
inhale to exhale within
now da soul reap time

Joyce

03-21-2002, 12:45 PM

A haiku beauty...you should post here mo often :)

manifested

03-21-2002, 01:10 PM

thanks for the reply Joyce. I will.

lookoutformyalterego

sean.

GYPSYMAN

03-22-2002, 04:34 PM

*buddha style*...like this.

g-man

thepoetsean

03-25-2002, 02:34 PM

thank you all for the read. it's much appreciated.

sean

Hunter

03-25-2002, 11:45 PM

you have scribed the capacity of lungs to inhale life's poetry...

breathing this one poet