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View Full Version : Haiku : No Excuse For Hesitation (double haiku)

Bert
03-13-2002, 07:25 AM
I couldn't hold her
because my arms lacked the strength
to carry two hearts

hesitation kills
that's the long and short of it
he's loving her now

BRB
Joyce
03-13-2002, 11:20 AM
Bert,

This is beautiful. I especilally loved the first haiku verse.
Do ya have any mo? :)

Joyce
$$RICH$$
03-14-2002, 12:32 AM
wow!! dis be a classic fo sho!
N2urSoul
03-17-2002, 11:19 AM
A great picture you've painted here!

N2 :)
cocobutterskyn
03-19-2002, 12:02 AM
Very enjoyable Haiku

Poetically Turn'd Out!
CCBSKYN :heart:
Nia Maishani
03-19-2002, 12:20 AM
Mahhhhvelous.
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