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03-10-2002, 06:07 PM
elements combine
earth air fire water entwine
will change more than minds
earth air fire water entwine
will change more than minds
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View Full Version : Haiku : A Changed Mind - Inspired by Joyce - My First Haiku in this Forum Destee 03-10-2002, 06:07 PM elements combine earth air fire water entwine will change more than minds $$RICH$$ 03-10-2002, 06:12 PM earth wind combind air to da mind of destee place i'm very happy N2urSoul 03-10-2002, 06:34 PM :eeek: Hey mama!! Absolutely love it! :D :love: Joyce 03-10-2002, 08:27 PM Gurl, I like dis and you got it rhyming too. That's something hard to do. And I felt every line thru and thru. alyce 03-11-2002, 01:29 AM brava, sis! :) a $$RICH$$ 09-12-2005, 04:05 AM this one still shines in da mind deepy 09-12-2005, 05:27 PM Inspired by joyce destee's mind swirls in beauty natures elements $$RICH$$ 09-12-2005, 07:11 PM echos wind blowin elements of life movin by air fire water |
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