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View Full Version : Haiku : A Changed Mind - Inspired by Joyce - My First Haiku in this Forum


Destee
03-10-2002, 06:07 PM
elements combine
earth air fire water entwine
will change more than minds

$$RICH$$
03-10-2002, 06:12 PM
earth wind combind air
to da mind of destee place
i'm very happy

N2urSoul
03-10-2002, 06:34 PM
:eeek: Hey mama!! Absolutely love it! :D

:love:

Joyce
03-10-2002, 08:27 PM
Gurl,

I like dis and you got it rhyming too. That's something hard to do.
And I felt every line thru and thru.

alyce
03-11-2002, 01:29 AM
brava, sis! :)

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$$RICH$$
09-12-2005, 04:05 AM
this one still shines in da mind

deepy
09-12-2005, 05:27 PM
Inspired by joyce
destee's mind swirls in beauty
natures elements

$$RICH$$
09-12-2005, 07:11 PM
echos wind blowin
elements of life movin
by air fire water

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