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N2urSoul
03-09-2002, 07:28 PM
An enraged ghost with
a torrid indignant wind
whenever you curse



N2urSoul

Joyce
03-09-2002, 08:52 PM
:(

I really feel the insight on this haiku. Can you imagine the torrent wind that little children feel from their parents when they say demonic things such as shut the f... up. Whenever, I see this happening, it hurts me to my heart. Then the children grow up often using the same horrendous language.

Enjoyed the read on this haiku Ms. N

$$RICH$$
03-09-2002, 11:14 PM
indeed the bang that hits ya !

N2urSoul
03-10-2002, 02:57 AM
Joyce ~

Yes, I can imagine how children must feel
whenever their parents are cursing out loud
or even directly at them.... must seem like
a howling evil wind that brushes up against
a child's face and turns them red, they stand
still not knowing how to feel -- and scared!!

Such a sad thought.... :(

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