Joyce
03-09-2002, 03:27 PM
His lips moist with words...
Sprays my soul with a sea breeze.
His mist revives me.
Beads surface my skin
In joy's anticipation...
I receive his love.
This is beautiful...
The righteous rhythm of love
Within my chamber.
N2urSoul
03-09-2002, 05:16 PM
Oh gurrrrrl! You be workin' da hell outta some haikus!! :)
$$RICH$$
03-09-2002, 11:11 PM
sistah Queeneth
ya Haikus be too tyght and on da money
dis flow u pose is out of reach
lovin it ............keep Haikus me happy! u go gurl!!!
Joyce
03-15-2002, 11:10 AM
Ms N.: I am glad you definitely :lol: enjoyed...gurl you are crazy!
Rich: I shall endeavor to do just dat. Thanks for showin' some love.:kiss:
Joyce
03-17-2002, 12:38 PM
Thanks BE...glad you enjoyed!
$$RICH$$
03-17-2002, 09:50 PM
i enjoy ya work
Haiku maketh me happy
forth it touch my soul
Joyce
03-18-2002, 12:38 PM
I'm glad you were touched
That's what poetry should do...
Touch the souls of men. :)
Nia Maishani
03-19-2002, 12:52 AM
Beautiful illustration of magnificent consummation.
Joyce
03-20-2002, 11:04 AM
Yes indeedy...thanks for the read sis. :)