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Joyce
02-03-2002, 02:41 AM
Imperfect parents
Loving imperfect children.
Ohhh...what perfect love.

$$RICH$$
02-03-2002, 10:17 AM
family whole heart
to perfection of loving
imprint soulful heart:heart:

Joyce
02-06-2002, 07:08 AM
Thanks for the read Rich. Your soulful reply is RIGHT ON.:)

j'hiah
02-06-2002, 07:16 PM
that's what i call the perfect famlee.

as always
j.

GA_Sunshyne
02-06-2002, 07:20 PM
in the words of Al Green... the message behind this
haiku was "simply beautiful". :)
thanks for sharin' your peace!

:heart:
Elayne~

Joyce
02-07-2002, 11:53 AM
Thanks J'hiah and GA,

I am learning to grasp this more as the months go by.
Thanks for the read.

wildflower7
02-07-2002, 12:47 PM
how true!
-7:spinstar:

Joyce
02-08-2002, 10:35 AM
Thanks for the read sis...yesss it is so true.

alyce
02-08-2002, 10:37 AM
I love how you say what you say through haiku...you are most profound. True skill joined with such wisdom.

thank you for always blessing

a

Joyce
02-19-2002, 10:11 AM
Thank you Alyce. Always appreciating yo reads.

baller
02-19-2002, 10:49 AM
...for all future parents who be under the impression that their children are gonna come out PERFECT.

thoughtful.

Joyce
02-19-2002, 06:06 PM
Thank you Baller. This little haiku was very much an "eye opener" for me. I wanted perfect children until I realized that it takes perfect parents to have perfect children.

N2urSoul
03-10-2002, 02:43 PM
moved per your request :)

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