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when i was hurting

klabarron
01-18-2002, 11:20 AM
i look into your face
i see pain and depression
a tear the processes
down the watered landscape of your cheeks
i see the swelling of your eyes
as many hours you have spent
in mourning
i feel your pain
i seek to empathize to sympathize
to understand where you are
and yet i am left with realization
that you suffer from self-inflicted wounds
from your own hands
bleeding
crying
dying
regretting even your very birth
dying
crying
bleeding
praying for a rebirth
crying
bleeding
dying
hoping for a new day
loving
living
flying
above every circumstance you created
i see you
mirror, mirror on the wall
oh why must i see me?

Rashad
01-18-2002, 11:27 AM
Well said my brutha!
I saw me too.
Thanks.

:)

$$RICH$$
03-15-2005, 01:41 AM
i've felt this one and know it so well
awesome drop bruh !

queentswana
03-15-2005, 09:46 AM
mirror, mirror on the wall
oh why must i see me?


I felt this to the core, it was awesomely written poet.

watzinaname
03-15-2005, 06:34 PM
Sometimes we can hurt ourselves in ways that others can only begin to imagine. Well put poet, I feel you indeed.

klabarron
03-15-2005, 08:46 PM
thanks for the read Sistas!!!
Peace

1poetsought
03-15-2005, 10:21 PM
Blaring Klabarron

His jukebox replayed

That dirge of scrutiny

For a peace full of life ~

TRUSISTA318
03-18-2005, 05:39 PM
:great: :dance1: :dance1: :hearts1: :tweety: :hot: i look into your face
i see pain and depression
a tear the process
down the watered landscape of your cheeks
i see the swelling of your eyes
as many hours you have spent
in morning
i feel your pain
i seek to empathize to sympathize
to understand where you are
and yet i am left with realization
that you suffer form self-inflicted wound
from your own hands
bleeding
crying
dying
regretting even your very birth
dying
crying
bleeding
praying for a rebirth
crying
bleeding
dying
hoping for a new day
loving
living
flying
above every circumstance you created
i see you
mirror, mirror on the wall
oh why must i see me?

klabarron
03-28-2005, 11:00 AM
thanks for the read fam. its was kind'a naked you know????

AHMOSE
05-08-2005, 12:16 PM
thanks for sharing this piece.

klabarron
05-10-2005, 11:03 PM
Open and bare to the world. Thanks for the read.

Preach(klabarron)

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