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$$RICH$$
03-23-2009, 02:02 AM
A twisted road of unknown ventures
sweet melon on cascading twine
curves hidden in caves above
yet displayed notion of love

Winding streets of somewhere
bubbles like ginger snap
reaching peeks of volcano's
skin like morning sunshine

pose curves like rocky mountain
hooked and nanny to perfection
drawz da heap of attention
my heart lone to mention

Like da third world i battle my motion
the feelings a continue fight
secrecy unbound not spoken
seen as (mother may I) can't hold back

secret curves of her .

Da Street So'ja
03-23-2009, 10:05 AM
or is she just "shy"

lol

for the record i'm not mad at those curves

Jazzytude
03-23-2009, 08:22 PM
A twisted road of unknown ventures
sweet melon on cascading twine
curves hidden in caves above
yet displayed notion of love

Winding streets of somewhere
bubbles like ginger snap
reaching peeks of volcano's
skin like morning sunshine

pose curves like rocky mountain
hooked and nanny to perfection
drawz da heap of attention
my heart lone to mention

Like da third world i battle my motion
the feelings a continue fight
secrecy unbound not spoken
seen as (mother may I) can't hold back

secret curves of her .

Wheew...what it do? could you dig a lil deeper and expand on this...LOLOL!

Im'ma get me some :wine: and enjoy!

:em2900:

watzinaname
03-23-2009, 08:49 PM
Like an unknown mountain path, swerving this way and that, to where does her road lead... Enjoyed your use of metaphor here, brother poet.

uplift19
03-23-2009, 09:18 PM
:terrific:

$$RICH$$
03-23-2009, 10:07 PM
so'ja ....could be shy or just curvy and in hiding ...let me go deeper !

Jazzytude .....without a doubt let me twist it some more to see deeper got cha !

Watz .....I'm gonna follow the pathway to somewhere i'll let you know where it lead too

Uplift19....smiling at cha ......as i glide deeper stay tune


Thankz family as i go for this ride ....

4EVERLUV
03-24-2009, 01:14 AM
$RICH$:
Yes...some of them curves have to be
a secret. Don't wanna take you too fast. lol
Lovn' yo flo as always.

Much Luv

$$RICH$$
03-24-2009, 01:29 AM
I have a Mustang road runner and i love hittin every curve like a whipper snapper
but i can slow down and round each curve out to perfection yes take me slow !!!!

hey sis been missing ya !

thatgirl74
03-27-2009, 07:34 PM
$$R$$
Curves and bumps make the ride more exciting
Hold on for the thrill ride.
Love it as always.

$$RICH$$
03-28-2009, 02:31 PM
I'm holding tightly but firmly thatgirl74 just don't push me off the ride is fire !
thankz dear.

baller
03-28-2009, 07:17 PM
i'm on an EXPLORATION dig...trying ta find me somma dem secret curves. i'll let ya know.

let the river flow.

$$RICH$$
03-31-2009, 07:16 PM
stay focus and go deep ahead for them curves just round the bend and oh' boyeee
lookout !
let me know what ya dig up !!!

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