asimplepoet
12-02-2008, 06:02 AM
I got a love jones
for only you and no one else
Wish you only knew
maybe i'll be brave
build up the nerve to say
how much i dig you
till then i will wait
secretly admiring you
enjoying the view
HODEE
12-02-2008, 06:49 AM
asimplepoet
I like the simplicity and view of this flow.
If they are aware.
It will be seen
No need for words
To spark a dream
It is good to be the object of admiration
Viewed by someone special
With adoration
Hesitation and taking a cautious view
Gives the viewer time to see if it's true.:love:
Da Street So'ja
12-02-2008, 08:40 AM
I got a love jones
for only you and no one else
Wish you only knew
maybe i'll be brave
build up the nerve to say
how much i dig you
till then i will wait
secretly admiring you
enjoying the view
NOW BUILD UP THE NERVE!
lol:SuN024:
Bootzey
12-02-2008, 04:30 PM
I'll give permission.
You may enter into my
Innermost Sanctum.
And I'll welcome you
With your preferred limbs open
And bless you to bliss...
But there is a catch.
I have to be able to
Trust you with my being
asimplepoet
12-02-2008, 04:58 PM
I would take the leap
If I could see tommorrow
To scared to fall
Falling hard in love
Is no fun if you're alone
So dear meet me there
You're asking for trust
I'm looking for staying power
so what is the deal
Bootzey
12-02-2008, 05:08 PM
I'll stay if you stay.
You have to promise never
Make me mistrust you.
sweet apple*pie
12-02-2008, 05:25 PM
Beautiful work, from a beautiful poet.
I think I gotta love jones too. :qqb006:
$$RICH$$
12-02-2008, 08:58 PM
Hidden secrecy
my love jones working on me
time i let her know
sweet apple*pie
12-02-2008, 10:15 PM
yea...A love jones is like that itch you got in tha middle of ya back...
...just can't reach it....
so it drives ya wild!
$$RICH$$
12-03-2008, 02:48 AM
U need somebody
to take care dat itch or what
cause i know someone
cocobutterskyn
12-04-2008, 11:05 AM
Diggin' the haiku Asimplepoet and that of those who followed your flow!
MaddSistahlyLove!
Coco:heart:
deepy
12-05-2008, 02:29 PM
spied you on the train
my eyes water drops of rain
oh this love jones drains
got to let you know
this jones continues to grow
heart rose please speak low