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asimplepoet
12-02-2008, 06:02 AM
I got a love jones
for only you and no one else
Wish you only knew

maybe i'll be brave
build up the nerve to say
how much i dig you

till then i will wait
secretly admiring you
enjoying the view

HODEE
12-02-2008, 06:49 AM
asimplepoet
I like the simplicity and view of this flow.

If they are aware.
It will be seen
No need for words
To spark a dream

It is good to be the object of admiration
Viewed by someone special
With adoration
Hesitation and taking a cautious view
Gives the viewer time to see if it's true.:love:

Da Street So'ja
12-02-2008, 08:40 AM
I got a love jones
for only you and no one else
Wish you only knew

maybe i'll be brave
build up the nerve to say
how much i dig you

till then i will wait
secretly admiring you
enjoying the view

NOW BUILD UP THE NERVE!

lol:SuN024:

Bootzey
12-02-2008, 04:30 PM
I'll give permission.
You may enter into my
Innermost Sanctum.

And I'll welcome you
With your preferred limbs open
And bless you to bliss...

But there is a catch.
I have to be able to
Trust you with my being

asimplepoet
12-02-2008, 04:58 PM
I would take the leap
If I could see tommorrow
To scared to fall

Falling hard in love
Is no fun if you're alone
So dear meet me there

You're asking for trust
I'm looking for staying power
so what is the deal

Bootzey
12-02-2008, 05:08 PM
I'll stay if you stay.
You have to promise never
Make me mistrust you.

sweet apple*pie
12-02-2008, 05:25 PM
Beautiful work, from a beautiful poet.

I think I gotta love jones too. :qqb006:

$$RICH$$
12-02-2008, 08:58 PM
Hidden secrecy
my love jones working on me
time i let her know

sweet apple*pie
12-02-2008, 10:15 PM
yea...A love jones is like that itch you got in tha middle of ya back...

...just can't reach it....

so it drives ya wild!

$$RICH$$
12-03-2008, 02:48 AM
U need somebody
to take care dat itch or what
cause i know someone

cocobutterskyn
12-04-2008, 11:05 AM
Diggin' the haiku Asimplepoet and that of those who followed your flow!




MaddSistahlyLove!
Coco:heart:

deepy
12-05-2008, 02:29 PM
spied you on the train
my eyes water drops of rain
oh this love jones drains

got to let you know
this jones continues to grow
heart rose please speak low

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