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$$RICH$$

11-30-2008, 04:24 AM

I cannot give you
when you not wide open to
recieve me in full
:em19:

Da Street So'ja

11-30-2008, 07:44 AM

that's usually how it works poet

feeling someone puttin' the close on your openness

:pie:

asimplepoet

11-30-2008, 10:11 AM

Wanting to give all
But you seem apprehensive
To my openness

$$RICH$$

11-30-2008, 09:07 PM

Treating me this way
like an open book unturned
so you refuse me

mizjoice

11-30-2008, 09:28 PM

no book stays unread.
the cover fascinates, draws me,
to read the whole book.

$$RICH$$

11-30-2008, 10:31 PM

Read me deeply
see all that i am within
each page reveal me

deepy

12-01-2008, 10:33 PM

open wide and deep
breathe, let the air in and out
cleanse,receive the rain

nice haiku rich....

$$RICH$$

12-13-2008, 05:55 PM

every drop drips like
abandoning me more so
then ever wait please!

lovealexandria

12-13-2008, 06:04 PM

want the song of rain
drip driping in my ears, i
hear you speak now please

$$RICH$$

12-13-2008, 06:08 PM

Take me as i am
for i am he that is me
open recieve me