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LadyBelle
11-23-2008, 08:33 PM
We dance this dance of wonder
this slow groove
slowly swaying carefully moving
around craving and desire
careful not to step to close to the edge
The fall is fast and liberating
but not free
not yet
our tongues have wings
they dance
whispering
slowly swaying
carefully flying inside
craving and desire
trying to seduce
the heart
the body
and the soul
to join this groove to fly::smooch::smooch:

Clyde Coger
11-23-2008, 08:55 PM
A Kiss

We dance this dance of wonder
this slow groove
slowly swaying carefully moving
around craving and desire
careful not to step to close to the edge
The fall is fast and liberating
but not free
not yet
our tongues have wings
they dance
whispering
slowly swaying
carefully flying inside
craving and desire
trying to seduce
the heart
the body
and the soul
to join this groove to fly::smooch::smooch:




LadyBelle,

Simply beautiful, LadyBelle, simply beautiful! The Kiss

careful not to step to close to the edge
The fall is fast and liberating
but not free
not yet

Profound, indeed!

$$RICH$$
11-23-2008, 09:01 PM
At a magnitude so great
handz abound lips lace'd
dancin against da windz
in a slow circle motion
tongue twister
spinning twriling
delightfully embracing
da moment of truth
fancy free
wings spread
under seductional
glaze seek da
heart, body and soul
to take flight
:flirt:


Awesome scribing sis love this kiss you so created from da depth of it's own slumber.

sweet apple*pie
11-23-2008, 10:22 PM
This was truly beautiful LadyBelle...you created this visual, that was so inside this kiss, that made me want to kiss someone for a very long time...

simply beautiful

LadyBelle
11-25-2008, 04:47 PM
Sweet Apple Pie, Thank you lady....Sometimes there is nothing more sensual than a tender kiss....a touch only a lover can suffice

Da Street So'ja
11-25-2008, 06:01 PM
what a kiss!

so spiritual, universal, beyond the flesh itself

great work poet

:bowdown:

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