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$$RICH$$
10-19-2008, 12:34 AM
It's midnight my love still gone
talking to my pillow
what da hell went wrong
holding it like tight
squeezing it right
wishing it was my baby tonight
reach fo da phone
only da message came on
here i am home alone

Got this feeling really strong
up in this illusion wit a blissin tone
envision my love tonight
in da midnight hour of hot delights
pillow talk my heart try to fight
she never round when i wanna get loose
little do she know her chicken out to roost
i can't help but think real deep
need some lovin can't even sleep

I tryed my hand but it won't do
I need my baby to see this through
another night alone at home
talking to da pillow about something strong
wondering what the hell's going on
turn da lights down to a soft dem
hug my pillow and said it was kim
only problem it never touched me back
pillow talk sho nuff is whack !

watzinaname
10-19-2008, 04:56 AM
Yes, I've been talking to my pillow quite a while, holding it tight too, but it has yet to do what I want it to. You think they sell some sort of magic pillow out there? No? I can relate, well written scribe poet.

$$RICH$$
10-19-2008, 05:32 PM
lol....watz they sell something fake like da real deal but deep inside i cannot feel
so my fluffy pillow is all i got u know how dat be until we mix and match ...

queentswana
10-19-2008, 07:28 PM
It's midnight my love still gone
talking to my pillow
what da hell went wrong
holding it like tight
squeezing it right
wishing it was my baby tonight
reach fo da phone
only da message came on
here i am home alone

Got this feeling really strong
up in this illusion wit a blissin tone
envision my love tonight
in da midnight hour of hot delights
pillow talk my heart try to fight
she never round when i wanna get loose
little do she know her chicken out to roost
i can't help but think real deep
need some lovin can't even sleep

I tryed my hand but it won't do
I need my baby to see this through
another night alone at home
talking to da pillow about something strong
wondering what the hell's going on
turn da lights down to a soft dem
hug my pillow and said it was kim
only problem it never touched me back
pillow talk sho nuff is whack !

Gee whiz, are you and that pillow, really alone?
I'm so susprise you even made it home.

yet I'm glad you had that pillow talk
when you finish, I want you to pack up and walk!

Ya gots to get the hell outa my home and my bed...
since this women of "Kim done went to ya head.

I'll tell you the reason we didn't connect,
cause I am the ONLY QUEEN ...or did you forget?

I've been called other women's names, what a sin
now you got the gaul...to call me KIM?

and that's why...

While you was waiting at home for some "Kim,
I was out getting my groove on with "Tim!

$$RICH$$
10-19-2008, 08:06 PM
:SuN018:

Now here we go again
u mess wit dat guy name Tim

and u want me gone
baby what's da hell wrong

i know i said kim
but that's one of my lawyer nem

u know ya da only one !

so where was u last night
when i was holding dat pillow tight
i guess tim had u right
but he won't see u tonight

I'm da king of this throne
nobody gonna take my home
but i'll leave cause it's all wrong
u and Tim now written in stone

ok baby i'm gone but i'll write u before long'
maybe we can still get it on
but pillow talk is like a clone
u might be talking soon when ya alone
:qqb009:

sweet apple*pie
11-21-2008, 09:25 PM
wow fam! I enjoyed this write and flobacks from da Queen!! Touching and funny! I do however, understand it's deeper context...

$$RICH$$
11-21-2008, 09:35 PM
Do you really! ...can you help me out ? give some advice or something
what a man to do when he's home alone wishing for someone who is afar.

sarcasm4eva
11-27-2008, 12:36 AM
I overstand the emotions you displayed.the usual results are hands that hurt, and wet pillows.lol.as far as advice goes, no reminiscing. keep your head up

$$RICH$$
11-27-2008, 12:43 AM
got cha .......and i been doing that trying to reach the next level thank u

sweet apple*pie
11-27-2008, 01:02 AM
yea...I agree with S4E.....for their is really no geniune subsitution for garden of fruit....


hard thing....no pun intended :blush:

sarcasm4eva
11-27-2008, 01:04 AM
let ya pen do the talking...no bottled up emotions/thoughts, thats a big no no
::Open arms for a bearhug::

$$RICH$$
11-27-2008, 01:09 AM
sweet apple*pie

i've been doing it and i think i may have a hold on to something .. hummm!


sarcasm4eva

I always let my pen do it but seem like it's not heard yet beyond emotions

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